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(You can't control other people's characters) *steps away and drake misses the guns*
Tom: *stops as jade suddenly tenses* Jade what's wrong?
Tom: *takes out his two pistols and aims one at Cynthia and one at Drake* Weapons down. Now.
Tom: They followed us all down to the beach, they had us cornered my crew was killed. I was the last one left. I hid in a cave and they all...
(Ok cherry and ok anime)
James: You're cute when you sleep.
(JAMES!)
Tom: *flashback* We were just setting sail when a terrible storm started, our mast broke and we drifted for days until we came to an island. The...
James: Ok, cya *winks at dolphin then walks away*
Tom: Yes, I've been there, with the navy… ten years ago…
(Drake's not even in Cynthia's cabin.)
Tom: That island is dangerous Cynth! It can break even the strongest of mean! I've seen what it can do to people!
(Add sexy to James' desc)
James: I said You didn't have a pretty face but I never said you didn't have a more than pretty face *smiles at her*
Tom: Have you ever been there Cynthia? Do you know what's on that island?!
James: But I bet whatever you're wear you're still sexy.
(He never muttered that he knew the way to dead mans cove, and he asked the question before he muttered as well.)
James: That's true.
(How does cynthia know that Tom knew the way to dead mans cove?)
There*