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Rory: *sharpens her dagger, not paying attention*
Rory: *shakes her head and sharpens he dagger*
Rory: *looks out at the water, mumbling to herself*
Rory: *walks out of the shadows and leans on the railing, dagger drawn*
Rory: *still hidden in the shadows, smirking*
Why, thank you. And I did learn, indeed.
Rory: *throws a dagger at Alexandria, hidden in the shadows* Oy! Get your bloody hands off that cap'n, ya hear?!
The only time I have ever described my characters as if was for a police description was twice, and they died a long time ago.
Rory: *snickers and leans on a wall, watching them*
Rory: *smirks as she listens to them, standing out of the shadows*
I will... soon...
Here's what I have to say: I like it, but it just seems too perfect. Add a little drama into the story. Don't let it be that perfect love story,...
Rory: *sharpens her daggers, watching everyone*
Rory: *growls and throws a dagger at him then slips into the shadows*
Rory: *walks over to Drake's ship unnoticed and roams his ship*
I would like to enter three of my stories: The Truth Can Hurt, Accidents Shouldn't Happen, and Love and Loss/L and L. That's all.
(Gah! Sowwy! then add...funny when she wants to be and easily destracted)
Rory: *stands, still in the shadows, and walks to her cabin, not making a sound*
Rory: *sit in the shadows, unnoticed, watching everyone*
(Name: Aurora (Rory) Miller Age: 23 Looks: [img] Personality: Has a really bad attitude, rude, flirty, seductive, hate most people, hard to...