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Raven: "Have you seen this castle before?" Sparrow: "It looks familiar. Somewhere from I think...during the Romeo and Juliet times. You know that...
See that's a prime example!
Guards: -Stops- "Where did he go? He was just right in front of us." Raven: -Studies the castle- "Hmm." Sparrow: -Goes to a fruit stand and buy...
Guards: -Still chasing him- "Thief! Get back here!"
People reads it but they don't comment you know!
Raven: -Continues walking around the village- Sparrow: -Follows him-
Guards: -Runs after him- "Hey! Get bak here!!"
All writers find there works horrible, I think my One Way Love story on here is bad, it's not all romance though.
Raven: -Glares at Nick's back as he run off- Sparrow: "Whoa there! Watch where you're going next time." Store Owner: -Runs out of the store-...
Bump!! Good job!!! Awesome update!!
By the way this is Elly, my mom have my phone and I have hers. Don't ask me why because I have no idea either .-.
Lol but it's good!
Bump!! Zane quit putting yourself down!
Raven: -Notices I have a sword hidden in my clothing along with some daggers and other weapons and my backpack- Sparrow: -Continues following her-
Raven: -Walks up to the entrance, sees the guards, nods at them and enters the village- Sparrow: -Waves at the guards happily and follows her-...
I stopped watching twilight after the second movie, not my type of movie...If I have to pick then I like The Hunger Games over Twilight. Although...
Miya: -Walks around the village-
Raven: -Looks around and sees a village with a castle, walks towards it- Sparrow: "Hey wait up." -Runs after her-
Bump!
Sparrow: -Notices my outfit- "Whoa!! Sweet! Look at my outfit." -Sees the bow and arrows- "It even have a bow an arrows!" -Sees Raven's outfit-...