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-sighs and kneels next to Cynthia- Can I do something? Anythin?
Mia: No wait... I am still drunk!
(dies. D*** it. .//////.)
-Mia slides down- no one is in their right minds... No one is noticing.
-Mia snaps- some one else is controlling the ship!
-Mia falls over slightly because of the abrupt turn- Mistress! -she runs to Cynthia- Mam'! No you can't! You aren't well!
Wow! That was a striking review! Flattered. I like that. But thank you. Still very rusty, but working on it. I just let myself type without really...
-whimpers- drinkin is not... Making me feel too great... -she runs to the restroom and throws up, sobered up- what... What just happened.
I ignore the woman's sharp stare and look up, and in a swift blink they are revitalized and reborn. I didn't notice, but my nails were scratching...
-takes jack hands- you muss' get that a lot. Sorry Jack... But yes. Rum. Drink. Good...
Cook? -blinks, confused- we have a cook... Named Jack... You know... Mamma always told me stories of Jack n the beanstalk... How's ur beanstalk...
-blinks, giggles- I... Sorry sire. You 'no... We're missing more and more of our shipmates.
-didn't hear Jack's call, the drunkness is messing with her brain- whose.. Jack? Another suitor...?
-smiles softly- ye are strong miss. And verry pretty.. No wonder you have men waiting in line to sweep you off your feet. But.. Are you happy miss?
-pouts sadly- oi miss... He loves you he does! -takes Cynthia's bottle and chugs the rest- he will come back he will! -rubs her face- you get the...
-Mika stands awkwardly with her broken remote control- does no one see me? -blinks-
-she hops up and grabs the bottle, chugging it down and throws it on the ship- OH NO... I will clean that later...-pouts- where is your mates...
-Mia smiles for the first time- I suppos' that's why you drink so much. Take away all your sorrows...
-starts to slide down and lays flat on the ship- cloooouds miss! Clouuuds!
-she smiles happily and opens her hand, there is a chocolate inside- I saved some... For you