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Alida -laying by the lake-
I quickly sat up in my bed and Mary laughed. "Calm down," she murmered. "It isn't time yet." "I swear I haven't slept all night," I replied...
If I ever see his face again, I swear I'll explode. And not just explode, but probably start burning from within, then once the fuse hits my...
( your both muffin tops)
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This isn't to bad, but it seems a bit rushed. It keeps going on but I really don't have a good idea of who the characters are.. It's detailed...
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(I'll bbl!)
Alida -walks to Shane and sits down with a smile- Hey
Alida -quickly on the hunt for Shane-
(o.o I'm scared.. So im gonna go.. Get a snack.. Bbl)
Alida -watches him amazed, claps with a few laughs- Wow!
(0.o)
Alida -smiles watching- Can you do any tricks up in the sky? I'm not very good at that yet
Alida -nods in agreement, looking at her own wings- Can your wings fold into your back? -looks back at his wings-
Alida -touches his wings- What do you hate most about.. Being like this?
Alida -laughs, and walks back into his arms- Can I ask you something? -smiling amused-
Alida -laughs and backs away from him crossing her arms- Hey!
Alida -laughs grabbing his other hand, trying to look serious- No don't that tickles!