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I read the whole thing, and will give my honest, fair criticism. Plot: Love stories are so overdone, but that is my opinion. But I feel as if...
Awesome!
Very good!
Okay.
Well, I don't have my parts copied... So I can't redo mine...
Start where we left off. Lol
I love this post. Truly a great concept!
I just don't like Harry Potter, but I figured I'd judge you on writing. It's only fair.
Since I am not a fan of the plot, I will judge upon writing skill. It's detailed, and very well-written. It would not be fair to judge on plot...
Well, they say it's a hectic place full of storms, and odd currents. So, it's probably natural disasters.
I thought it was great. I'll update soon, I have a huge migraine.
Start a new thread and continue where we left off.
It's not always me, frankly it's the first time I've ever hurt someone's feelings on here. But she's continuing, so I'm not worried about it. And...