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Jack: *smiles* I know
Drake 21 [img] He carries a pistol in his jacket after almost being killed by a stalker at age 15 He's a teacher's assistant because he wants to...
(I don't mean to be harsh I'm just examining your character)
Jack: *holds open the door for her like a gentleman and when she gets in he buckles her seatbelt for her
(it was an expression my character description is on page 3 and it explains why he has all his skills as well as why he's rich)
(*car)
Jack: *takes her hand and leads her to his care
Jack: *grins* so I was thinking we could hit the movies?
(we are all rich people so why is your character a male model who knows how to hunt?)
Jack: *smiles and pulls away* I think I just may love you
Jack: *smiles and kisses deeper
(no explanation of why a stuck up rich person has these skills?)
Jack: *smiles and stands up then kisses her putting the rose in her hand gently with his hand
Jack: would you be my girlfriend? *gets on one knee and holds out a rose
Jack: *finds emmy* why hello
But not this disturbing
Jack: *sitting alone Drake: *flirting with Dakota
I'm perverted but I'm not that perverted
I was half asleep when I said bump it was 4th of July and I'd been up since 3 am I was quite literally exhausted
I was half asleep when I read this -.- its just ew