Separate names with a comma.
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Kaitlyn: walking down the street holding Erik's jacket and wearing a long jacket. she looks like this but with long brown hair. [img]
Kaitlyn: walking down the street.
Kaitlyn: smiles back from up in her tree. Me too. I like it when thinks are quiet and calm.
Kaitlyn: looks down at max. No not at all. I was going to thank you for being so peaceful and not loud like them.
Kaitlyn: walking along a slim but sturdy branch at the top of the tree.
Kaitlyn : here's fighting and sighs. Gets up and climb another tree.
Kaitlyn: sees max and poke him.
Kaitlyn: sitting on a bench
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(teellllll meeeeee!) kaitlyn: playing with Oliver.
I wanna know the secrets!!
-.-
(OOO secrets. I love secrets!)
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His name is wolfsun
Kaitlyn: watches her knock on johns door for a moment. Shrugs and walks away with Oliver.
Yeah I'm a fast reader.
Very well written. Try to use more original words and try to use commas a bit more. But a very good plot and story.
Kaitlyn: alright. Pets Oliver who is perched on her forearm.