Separate names with a comma.
You know, sugar coating things is not my style. Please enlighten me how I could've said those things in a nice way?
I'm not afraid to share my opinion.
Much... But remember some apostrophes... Like im is I'm, dont is don't, etc...
Yep.
Adam's POV Holy ****! I thought to myself almost falling backwards at the sight of the giant before us. It had to be at least thirty feet tall,...
Your update is written. Amanda, being my best friend, gets first look. I'm waiting for her reply.
Hate? Ahem... It's honesty. If honesty is considered hate...I'm a proud giver of "hate."
Don't give up on it if you like doing it... Just take advice and improve.
I'm sorry, but this is so cliche, and honestly very badly written and boring. It needs very much improvement.
Yes! Haha They didn't fall in love and get married like other stories...she pointed a gun at his head and captured him. Lol
You are forgetting end punctuation in your quotations.
I love it. I could imagine very vividly!
Wolf... You brought my story back! Thank you! Ha I'll update soon.
Sure!
Good* not could.
I know... Fix the errors, it could be could.
Sorry dude... But the detail is terrible, the word choices are bad, the story is rushed, and there are grammar mistakes...
I'm so flattered... Yeah, those stories are getting so old... I can't even stand them...
My specialty.