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Bump . Your beginning updates are amazing! You draw the reader in really well . I have yet to master that skill .
~~~~UPDATE!~~~~ School's been goin' pretty slow and it's only the fifth day! I stopped wearin' dresses to school 'cause I apparently am...
Awww thanks, Katie . I'll try to keep this interesting for you .
Updating probably 2-4 more times today!
You talked on the first page though
Thanks, Katie . People haven't really been reading it . I guess it's not really their taste?
Bump .
Update
Suspense omg . I was practically biting my nails reading this . It's great so far! Just put an extra space between paragraphs for neatness....
This story really does have potential, and in the next couple of updates, you could develop your weaker skills. Take Rose's advice .
~~~~UPDATE!~~~~ I wake up to the bright sunlight shinin' in my eye. Today's the first day of high school; I'm a little nervous because there's so...
This is great and full of detail! Just make sure to separate who the person speaking is. Like "Marie's POV" or something! I'm writing a story...
I guess this doesn't interest people . It's okay... I'll just keep posting until someone decides to read it
Bump
Amazing!
I am absolutely awed at how well-written this is! I am usually not into horror, since I do get scared very easily, but this sort of a horror...
Thanks Katie .
bump
Oooo suspense . I like this a lot. Great details!
This thread is still more popular than my actual story, how sad.