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IT'S PERFECT THE WAY IT IS!! But if you want some criticism the double enter after every paragraph/ line of dialogue. Other than that just...
I think bringing back the old stories is a wonderful idea. We should create a new post(I would be willing to if you guys agree) that has a list to...
Cool. I like it. Especially that little poem at the end.
Party. But….if I really had a choice, I would say both. So I vote for BOTH! If that's ok with you.
(I totally forgot about thisSo sorry!!) Kiara:-wandering
Ooohhh!!Prince Van is trying to make a new "lady friend" *winkwink*
I had no clue it would so thatyeah…
LOVE IT!!bump
LLOVE IT!even if she chose Ian
LOVE IT!even though he choose Ian.
ZANE ALL THE WAY HE IS A GENTLEMAN AND SO HWME QUALIFIES FOR S. W. A. G. Ꭶhe Ꮚants Ꭿ Ꮹentleman Point proven
EWWW NO!!!
Kiara:-heads back towards the campfire, warming her hands near the fire while rubbing Juno-
Kiara: -Sees John transform- Whoa.....
(Oh) Kiara:-looks at John- Are you ok? Can you hear me?
(I thought John was a guy name? No offense)
*her
Kiara:-slowly walks towards him arms open-You don't need to be scared
Kiara:-silently follow John- Are you ok?
Kiara:-finally pulls Juno back and calms her down- bad Juno, bad, bad, bad! Juno:-whimpers and puts her tail between her legs-