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I've always liked spy stories.
Kayla Warren Any age needed, raven black hair and emerald green eyes, pale skin, 5'7", always wears a pony tail Likes to run track, has zero...
Brittany Once I got all my junk in my new room, I fell onto my new bed exhausted. I tried to remember how many times my dad and I had moved, but...
Kayla Warren Whatever age needed, black hair, emerald green eyes, pale skin, tallish Quiet, always has a book with her, generally concerned...
Lol, I'm just talking about typos and stuff. Those are easy for anyone to overlook.
I'll update after lunch
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Adam "Adam! Get your rear in gear and help our new guests with their luggage!" I heard my mom, Nellie, shout up to the loft. "Take a chill pill...
Ok, a little harsh maybe? Though constructive criticism is needed.
I could nag about little things, but I don't feel like being a grammar Nazi today. All in all, awesome story!
Awesome!
I know what you mean. There are a ton of jerks in this game, at least we have Fan Fic.
Kayla Warren Whatever age needed, raven black hair and emerald green eyes, ghost white skin even in the summer, 5'7", total night owl. Can't...
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Also, your story is awesome.
Oh my gosh! Right as I read the part about the song, it started playing on my TV. o.O
I just started reading this, but I'm glad I did!
This is great!