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PICTURES!!!! Terissa (Riza): [img] Oliver: [img] Preston: [img] For the record, I think Preston is the cutest . (This is the part...
Bump . I really like this
How cayoooteee
Ooooooo ?
I'm mean and heartless
Make sure the reader knows it's from the future. In Ch 1 you should've put "Five years ago" or something like that
Mags . That was fast . I will maybe tomorrow or when more people ask
It's no problem . The first time is always hard . I know it'll get better
If you need an example of how to structure things, look at some of the other stories here in FF
But like the prologue doesn't make sense. A prologue is supposed to be an introduction giving information about the person. You can't introduce...
The Grammy flashback will be in the next next update . This one focuses more on Preston and Terissa . Then it will be the Grammy's update. After...
Rose? Claire? ?
Obvs the bartender
I'm confused ?
This is beyond perfect and completely true
I'm fine with either .
Danny, don't you want that cool apron now
Oops . Well, you'll see!
BUMP . OMG. What is that fluid that she isn't drinking
OMGGGGF SHANA THIS IS GREAT!!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS AHHH