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I think we should get more info about Cody and the Best friend. ( I forget his name..) For the two guys, I think I need more info on them. But...
Soo,.. I got like 100pgs into the 3rd one and got totally bored. Is it worth continuing? I love the first and second buuuut.. Dunno bout the third.
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[Please.]
-I lean against a wall, before I slowly slide to the floor, my legs out in front of me. I yawn and sit there, thinking.
-I see Jay on a bench outside and debate wether or not to go out there. He broke my heart.. do I still like him?
-I awake to find myself in my brothers room i quickly stand up and try my hardest to sneak out before I wake him up. I walk slowly out the door...
-I quickly turn around and walk out of the room. Looking for my brothers room.
-I see a girl running out, and slowly back away..
-I stand up and walk down the nearest hall, searching for my brothers room. I see Jay sitting on a cot in one room. "J-Jay?"
"Anything I can.. Erm.. Do?"
-I glance at the boy next to me. "Everything okay..?
-I rush into the hospital holding my little brother. We believe he broke his arm. Nurses carry him to the back room. I sit down beside a boy...
Violet Beauregarde ; Because I can spell her last name correctly. ;DD JK. I am terrific at acting spoiled and getting what I want. (Not to copy...
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-I jump off the couch and walk towards the road Fox directed me too. "Where is that damn house?..."
I text Jay from the creek. "Hey. What's up?"
[Lets start it up again.] -I walk past Jay's house, towards the creek in a lavender bikini.