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"OK," Joel said, "Good plan. It's starting to get dark and that should give us some shelter." Amy checked the hunting rifle that was slung over...
Aargh! I keep accidentally switching tenses!
"Huh, this might not be so bad after all..." Joel said. "Great, now you've jinxed it," Amy said laughing before punching Joel lightly on the Arm....
"Well, everybody does things they shouldn't so I'm far from perfect but yes, that's the only serious thing that I've done. Accident or not," Joel...
"Fair enough, but at least you're kind." Joel suggested. "Yeah, the way I see it, everyone does bad stuff it's just some people do more than...
"What about you? Acting all mysterious with your knife? Why are you here?" Amy asked.
"So far it looks like the only person who deserves to be here is him," Joel pointed out, shooting a stare at Alex.
"Yeah, I'm OK." she says shakily, "How did you get caught?" Joel smiles at Val in a moment of mutual wanting-to-kill-Alex appreciation.
Joel grabs Alex and shoves him against a nearby tree. "Right, listen to me. I don't know what fucked up planet you come from, but where I come...
"I like that plan," Amy said, laughing. "What about you Fawn? Why are you here?" Joel asks.
"Best not to ask honey," Joel said warily, "I think I already know..."
"What does that mean?" Amy asked, curious, "What did he do?"
"Are you this rude to everybody?" Joel asked Alex, looking slightly disgusted. "Hi Val," Amy replied. "So... What's the plan?" Joel wondered,...
Joel gave Fawn a nod before explaining to Amber, "Well, there was a pretty serious riot in our town - quite a rough area really. Our house got...
'Cool, hey everyone,' Amy said cheerfully, naturally moving towards Claire and Amber as they seem the friendliest. Joel grunts a hello and follows.
'I'm Joel, this is my daughter Amy,' Joel says with one eye on Alex. 'Hi!' Amy chips in, 'And you guys are...?'
Joel glares it Alex, 'I've heard what you've done, get the fuck off my daughter!'
'Wait.. For us.' Joel calls. Him and Amy start walking towards the group. 'Dad, what the fuck where those things?' 'I don't know Amy, I don't...
The pair get closer. 100m 'Come on baby, we're nearly there!' the man shouts. 70m 'I'm just behind you dad!' 50m You start to make out their...
As the barks and screams of the uncoming horde near, a pair of bodies start sprinting towards the group. One looks like an adult male and the...