Separate names with a comma.
This is really good I just have one little suggestion and that is to try and break up the paragraph a bit more. u know?? It'll be easier to read!!
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY PLEASE BUMP!!!!
Update
POST IT NOW!!!!!! please!
This is super dooper cool and amazing LUV IT!!! bump and more pretty please!
Bump!! Maybe some punctuation and capitalize?
BUMP!!!
Really random
Wrong section
That awkward moment where there are only two people on this rp and the story doesn't even make sense Lol
Please do a sequel. You are an amazing writer and I look forward to ur posts!!!! Please do another one please please please!!!
I agree with lindsey!!!
Awko taco I did read the third book I was wondering how snows granddaughter took power
Please update
Bump this is good Jw wht happened to the other government at the end of the book??
YAYAYYA u redid it!!
Oh awko taco so am I
It's not my story lol
Yay!!!
Bpump!