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Brilliantkeep on going at your own pace It's starting to get a bit confusing, and rushed. I still love it. keep on doing what your doing. And...
Heck ya I've been waiting for this~! I totally knew it~ I figured he was collecting body parts..how lovely in a creepy sorta way. Felix is scary...
It's hulk
This guys a freak...and I love it. Sorry I didn't get to it earlier I was checking my story sideline guy. But Felix gets more interesting as...
I'll mask my true intentions behind what I owe you ill fulfill my promise and make you pretty. How lovely...I have an idea of what he's doing...
Yep
Doing your job right, o.o how creepy is this Felix really Always ✔ and double ✔ before posting. Sure some things may slip by you, but all in all...
It's fine, but I would work on that, hehe the plot is supposed to unveil itself. Holy bananas this guy is creeping me out...Felix is an...
sending chills down my spine, you must continue. I like the way it's been plotted and organized. Great grammar and description. Letting the...
I loved it!!! The way the character of Mary is portrayed is so gripping, the plot itself is completely interesting. I can't wait~ keep up the...
The more Chris struggles the more Emmer dies slowly inside. Two months ago was a very chilling event. Something none of our main characters want...
This is a great kind of confusion very mystifying I can't wait for the next update, but I hope she isn't lonely...the story must go on
I want more, it's so good!!! I love it. At some parts it confused me a bit though, but you're an awesome writer and it's a gripping story. ^Bump^
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Thanks for the awesome review Mel! I'll try to improve on my I's thing, but writing in first person I'm not sure that I can. Well it brings me...
Sorry it took a while for the update, but it's finally here! The continuation on the vacation cases. Can you solve them before our characters do?...
I loved every bit of it Mel...the plot thickens.
I've decided to update this again, but with a little spiff on things. Two months later... Entry #26 Sorry, it's been a while notebook, after the...
Since Mel is doing reviews I'd love a Review of Sideline Guy, I really don't know how it's doing so far I'm still in the process of updating it,...