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And this, my friends, is why I stay out of most things. They always seem make things and make them out of proportion. Destroyer. Respect...
Re: **** in a Box I dot mind the swears. It gives it more of a modern teenage view on it
It's fine. I'm just giving you some feedback other than the lifeless (and now misused) bump
It's good. Detail would be extremely helpful. Pictures help but also what the expressions were, description of scenery, and description of...
*royale *proportion
I changed my opinion like royal once I realized I was blowing it out of proportional. I'm still sticking with "I dont like how they have taken up...
I honestly don't care about rps. It just annoying trying to sort through all the rps to find a story that has been pushed down three pages in the...
Mentoring is when you have a new person under a more experienced persons wing. And we were all once Newbs. Newbs= new people.
Let me try to sum this up Newbs stop making rps If you wanna make a story, consult vets for tricks, and tips to make it good. And...
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And when you bump, you bump stories that ARE NOT ON THR FIRST PAGE.
*looks for Otto*
Thanks wolf. I am still busy. So if you guys can wait till summer then I will definitely give you guys an update
*blonde. Other than that it's good. It's hard to give criticism for a veteran
Damn he stole my "too" correction. It's good. Maybe a little more detail. Like about Darrel or the people beating him up. Or even maybe the...
Bump. I want mote updates
Bump
Good intro. Anything I was gonna said was already said so no use repeating the same feedback.
Haha nice. Check out All That Remains
Congrats Noe get off fletchs thread. Since he said it twice. I believe if you don't abide then he can get a mod to silence.