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Alida -clamps hands over her mouth, gagging, getting ready to puke, choked out- Land. Land. Land!
Alida -plays with his fingers again to soothe herself- It's just a gut feeling
( -eats popcorn-)
Alida Something.. Big.. Maybe deadly.. And something that wants to kill me -looking up seriously at him-
Alida -crawls into his lap, looking on the direction she had been before- Something is down there Sal..
Alida -points down suddenly, seeing something and overs to the very edge of flint- What in the world?! -leans forward out over the edge, hand...
-looks around in fear- Must I really wait that looooong! I may die
Alida -gets the hiccups, and grumbles-
-eats popcorn- I'm scared.. Mom!? .... What happens next!?
Alida -listens to his heart, staying quiet, playing with his fingers, taking glances up at his face-
Alida -hugs him closer, heart racing at his words- I love you so much -mutters, closing her eyes and curling to him-
( ya momma ain't gonna like that )
Alida -pets Flint and watched around a bit dizzy, turns back to look up at Sal with a timid smile-
Alida -laughs quietly holding on tight, relaxes to him instantly-
()
Alida -stands eagerly, fixing her dress up a bit before nodding at him- Yes, let's get on our way again
Alida -hugs him close, playing with a lock of his hair- You would be just as dashing none of less -smiles-
Alida -blushes taking him in- More handsome then I ever thought could be possible
Alida -watches over at Sal with a grin, her eyes taking a sweep of his appearance-
I love it its very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter