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Eric:-walks in cantenia-
Can I make new guys?)
Eric:-lands and gets out-
Eric:-jumps in my starfighter-
Eric:-force pushes him against wall and stabs him-
I messed up the first line I ment I winced inside
Eric:-swings sword at another sixth and we fight-
I'll add more I just want more comments to help it grow and be better
PLZ comment!
Eric:-stabs a sixth in heart-
Ok when u read PLZ comment or post tips it helps me write thanks alot! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1 I wince when I feel the...
Are stories good to make now?
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Am I accepted)
Eric 18 Looks:[img] Jedi Extra: has purple lightsaber
I'm killing all my guys sorry) Findelf:-leaves note for ranna and mounts my house and rides my army to an outpost and gets hit by death spell and...