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A KID?! you had to put in a kid?! She's gonna make their lives hell (not really), any more chapters coming soon?
Lol thanks for the characters TM! I was already having a hard time giving the other characters names xD
I agree!!! (to blondie) this should be read by fanfic writers until the first pages r filled with decent stories :D Blondie, my first ever story...
Thanks y'all :) glad ur liking it!
This is all useful, but I don't think stopping if you think your story is bad is a good advice... Good writers start from being crappy writers. I...
Finally I found this again lol! I die?!?! but yeah, keep going! You can fix mistakes later lol
Bumped for Bree
Thank you :)
Chapter 1 What comes to your mind when you hear the word 'ninja'? You'd probably say 'japanese' 'black hooded shape shifters' or 'creepy...
Thanks! Yes a friend would be great! XD
Skye Halloway Dirty blonde hair, blue eyes Age may vary She's a good friend but can be short tempered, she's easy going and doesn't take...
Whoa. No Bree it's not that long ^_^ But I'll b waiting! Lol
When r u gonna upd?! LoL this would be interesting! Reminds me of maximum ride the books :3
Dude...!!!!!! this is GOOD!!!
Bump...?
Thank you mister_eagle and Bree!
Prologue I never thought the day would come. I felt like I was in a movie as I stared out the window of the car. It was raining and I watched as...