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Xander: -smiles and gets on the interstate- we have a long drive ahead of us... U can plug ur iPod in and listen to it on the radio if u want......
Xander: -grabs her iPod and hands it to her- her u go little butterfly... -starts driving down the road- Sophia: -follows-
Jezzabell: alright...
Sophia: -gets in her car with her babies and starts it up- Xander: -gets in his car and gets ready to drive off-
Jezzabell: what's wrong Cynthia?
Xander: -to Scarlet- "I love u too..." Sophia: -Ichigo finishes- alright I'm ready... -takes the babies and puts them in their carseats in the car-
Jezzabell: -smiles and pulls out her sword- sound fun
(it's ok... U should read my story :D)
Sophia: once I finish feeding the babies i will be... -Rukia finishes and I set her down as I feed Ichigo-
(I wish I could here how u sound!!!!! Btw y'all should go and read my story... Out For Love or For Blood?)
Xander: are you ready little butterfly? Sophia: -feeds the babies-
Jezzabell: -walks up to Cynthia- so what r we doing today
Well I know that some ppl who write on here... Including me... Have it typed up somewhere else as well... I was only saying that I don't...
Xander: it's in the car... -kisses Scarlets cheek-
Samantha: yeah Peridot?
Sophia: -puts her stuff and the babies stuff in her car- Xander: -takes his and Scarlets stuff to his car-
Jezzabell: -watches Kat and thinks about Jack- (hey y'all should check out my story...)
Samantha: -walks in Peridots room and sits next to him-
What I mean is u shouldn't tell us as readers what to do... We comment what we think... Some of us don't comment about mistakes cuz one the story...
Samantha: -goes to Peridots room and knocks- Peridot... Open up... It's me... Please talk