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Jack: He grabs a pre-planted drill, and slow goes to work drilling a hole in the glass.
Jack: "Change of plans, I'm gonna smash the glass." He says into his earpiece.
(Back) Jack: "Well this took an unexpected turn." He says.
(Gtg)
Jack: "Angel if you do we'll be done for."
Jack: "Yeah I'll pass..." He says as he continues to examine the box.
Jack: Laughs. "I could totally betray you and leave right now, or grab the money for myself."
Jack: "You guys look beautiful together."
Jack: "I wasn't counting on the box being glass, but don't worry I'm sure they'll transfer it to a safe. This might not be as quick as I thought...
Jack: "...you sure?"
Jack: "OK, I got good news, and I got bad news. Which would you like first?" He says into his earpiece.
Jack: Walks to the back, eyeing up the glass box.
Jack: He lightly waves to Ark. "I got eyes on you, get the crowd good and distracted and we'll go."
(It won't be for like an hour though) Jack: He watches the two through the crowd.
Jack: He speaks into his earpiece. "Be ready Silver." (I might be gone for an hour or two)
Jack: "Angel, this isn't part of the plan." He stresses.
Jack: He looks up, finally noticing them. "Let's just get this over with." He says as he stands and walks further into the crowd.
Jack: He doesn't notice them as he adjusts his tie.
I like it, I feel like it can go a lot of places.
(Idk yet.)