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Bump. :D Updaaaate.
Bump!༄
Jess: *Goes up to her dorm and fumbles about with the key, trying to get it into the lock. Eventually does and pushes the door open.*
Jess: *Walking around.*
I said that because i thought it would start last night whilst I was asleep. :3
Jess: *Hears a growl noise and looks around.* Voice: *Says in an echo,* Welcome, shifter, to the woods... Jess: *Squawks and flies up into the air.*
(Keep saying forest. >.< *Woods.)
Jess: *Flies deeper into the forest.*
(*: *allowed.)
Don't listen Spike. He's just annoyed as he doesn't have awesome hair like me. ི
Jess; *She frowns, wondering why people aren't aloud in the forest.*
He's lying. Don't believe him. D:<
Jess: *Pecks a few berries.*
Jess: *Flies down, landing at the top of a tree.*
I like it. :D But maybe to improve use paragraphs, a new line when someone speaks, and punctuation in speech marks. :3 For example: "I like ice...
(I'm Rani's alt. :3 )
:0 :D.
Jess: *Flies up into the air, and heads in the direction of the forest.*
Jess: *Steps out, changing to parrot form so she won't be recognised.*