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ONEE-CHAN!!!! \(^-^)/ btw this is_ Fyre-Heartz_'s alt ._.
A Typical Ghost Story Preface My name is Jonas Sean Parali; I’m 18 years of age, single, tall, skinny with chocolate brown hair. I drive a...
I like a romantic-kid-eating 15-year-old zombie but seriously, all of em sound cliche ._.
Chapter 9 Callie's POV "Well, that was interesting," I said, still having some difficulty breathing. "Why isn't she naked?" Serenity asked...
Bump! Try to separate it into paragraphs and make it longer. More dramatic. Like this. There's a space in between the paragraphs. Suspencccce....
Chapter 8 Callie's POV Alex growled at me in impatience. I flicked him off. A muscle in his jaw twitched and he stormed towards me. I held up my...
Bad noob
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Chapter 7 Callie's POV "Oh!" I exclaimed. "She's a cutie! Do you know her?" She was a small child with glossy long black hair and chopped bangs,...
O_O
CJS
Chapter 6 Callie's POV "Oww..." I rubbed the elbow I'd landed on and glanced around. I appeared to be in a square room with slightly dusty wood...
Hooray
Juliet
Anxiety
Chapter 5 Todd sighed dramatically. "Ugh, I can't deal with you lot today!" He swatted away another ghost. "For once, I actually have a paper to...
Chapter 4 Serenity breathed in the vapors of her cigarette, holding the smoke in her mouth until she blew it out in one smooth breath, creating a...
Dark**