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[Scratch that then.] -Glares at Derek, "Don't look at me."
[@God. Whaaaaaa? You never did?...]
-I glare at Derek. "Don't smile at me."
-I fake blush, we're passing right by Derek now. "He did seem to like me, eh? But he said his friend would like you! I'm sooooo excited for...
Says to Opal, "Dudeee, wasn't he hot though?" -I grin
"Kira, you coming or not?"
"Nahh. He's bringing some SUPER hot guys with him. Don't worry."
-I wave back and shout a little to loudly, "Wanna meet up at the club tonight? Danny invited Opal and I."
-I grab your stuff and begin to walk past the part of the pool where Derek and the girl are. "Soo, Danny wants to meet us at the club at 7."
"Play along." -I stand up
-I see Opal again and walk towards her. "You wanna do something fun?" -I grin
-I hear people jumping in the pool and I glance up. There was Derek with ANOTHER girl.-
**wave
-I wake back and continue to walk towards the hot tub. I find a lounge chair and lay down on it.
-I pass by the bar and see Opal. "Heyy!.."
-I walk up to a grille and order a burger and coke. I grab my lunch and then walk towards the pool so I can work on my tan.
Jewel, please stop making multiple threads. Unless your gonna update it and treat it like a story, you need to keep it to one thread. You could...
I love Josh.
-I get out of the pool and sit down next to James.-
-I stand there awkwardly before muttering, "I'm gonna... Go."