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The second floor was much like the first, only with bedrooms. However, the air was much easier to breathe than it had been the enclosed level...
I ignored her as I started to pick my way through the junk. Sally searched beside myself, and together we explored the entire first floor. It...
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Well usually when I have time I'd work on the next scene but I still have studying and cleaning to do n I like to at least write one update...
Sally searched through the grass with her feet, and she pulled up another small fragment about ten feet away. She held it up so I could see before...
WOW THIS IS AMAZING
Name: Dean Fillips Age: 18 Grade: 12th grade Job: Waiter at a cafe Looks: Mid-length black jet hair, sharp black eyes, 6'1, tanned skin, built,...
Is this a story? If so I think it's great, but use capitalization and punctuation, also spread into paragraphs
"Of course not," I replied easily. "But that doesn't mean she's not here." "Yeah, well I wish we had more to go on than a couple of websites,"...
thanks, imma update in a couple of minutes
It was a short hike as we stomped past rocks, thorny branches, and the occasional animal-dug hole. The cold, early November air stung my nose and...
Thanks melancholy first reader and commenter
The house sat at the top of a low, wide hill, overlooking the expanse of fields we were passing. Instead of facing the road like most houses, this...
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The Colorado grumbled down the paved road, bouncing myself and Sally whenever it hit one of the ruts or potholes that pocketed the ground. We...
UPDATE btw her parents sound like snobs (my opinion)
UPDATE!!!!!! Now!
Her head was being entrapped closely in a cloudy haze that she became totally unaware of a person behind her, eyeing her with sturdy interest....
Marina flushed at the sudden contact with a stranger, a beautiful stranger. So, she didn't mind. However, it was too early for her to trust a...
Bright lights weaved marvelously from the bustling streets. The night ensuing as droplets of snow twirled down bit by bit, settling into the...