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Rose: "What will happen if I am, Blake?"
Rose: Blushes. "O-Oh God... Sal's gonna kill me..."
Hope: "Awh!" Apperates onto his lap. "Whats we reading?"
Hope: Laughs at him so much I fall over. Rose: "What? Why?"
Rose: "Blake...?"
Rose: Has perfect hearing and heard what he said. "Tell me what, Blake?"
Rose: Raises an eyebrow. "Urm... Hey?"
Hope: Smirks. "So you wouldn't over react if i kissed you then?"
Rose: Hears something fall and scurries over. "Blake!" Helps him up.
Hope: "Your lips say that but your blush tells me something else, Micheal." Rose: Laughing to herself sat on the swing.
Hope: Takes the book and shuts it leaning close to Mike. "Don't believe you."
DE: "Well go to her now then. She doesn't know it yet but urge her to take a test."
Hope: Takes the book off of him and looks into his eyes. "Mike... Why have you brought me here? You tackled me, made the potion retracked me down...
Hope: "Come again?" 0.0
DE: "If she's carrying your child would you allow her to be Hurt?" Ignores Blakes comment.
Hope: "Urm, Mike? Why are you showing me this, lover boy?" 0.0
DE: "How is getting someone pregnant confusing?" Cocks his head to the side.
Hope: Raises an eyebrow as Mike takes my hand. "Um 'kay." DE: "Haha, so she could be pregnant with your child and you wouldn't even know!"
Oh great story btw a few spelling errors but keep writing and you'll get better, lovie.
(Lol I know, dear. I spoke to him on KaW the other day. ^.^)