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But him treating like a puppy and then start loving her would be like heaven.. Update Katie!
So he's just like her, this is getting better and better!
And see, your story has reached the 100th page! That calls for celebration, right? Nothing better than writing a lovely pretty little cute update,...
Please please please finish the story! Write it all at once whenever you get the motivation, but please stop torturing us jihi! Update please!
Superb!! Grammatical mistakes here and there , otherwise this one was even better! You balance the gruesome-ness pretty well
FF is about to get another mind boggling story! But please, please continue it and update regularly! Please? I really love the way you have...
I hate it when people start this lovely story and then leave it to rot. They make the readers to cry themselves to sleep!
Love the concept, update please!
I was kidding, of course it's up to the writer and the writer alone.
Shannon, now if you want some fun in your life, I'll give you a tip:...
*HAD
YOU HAVE TO BRING ME OUT OF LURKING!! UPDATE ALREADY GIRL!! SHE IS NOT DOING SO BECAUSE SHE'S ENJOYING YOUR FIGHTS. STOP FIGHTING!! OR YOU'LL...
He liked her better the way she was.. Poor guy, can't decide which way to go
Katie has this really bad habit of starting really amazing stories, getting people hooked to them and then rarely updating them. Kidding waiting...
Update ASAP
Helena and dante in the end will make it fun. Interesting of course
You're awesome and you know it ! And I can't praise you enough! I want to know what happened and what will happen!!!
Update asap!