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I slowly turned the shower on, and watched as the water fell to the drain. It was slowly getting warmer, as I put my hand under it. I stripped...
Didn't mean to press post! I will update longer!
I woke up in sweat. For some reason, a nightmare of death had fallen upon me while I asleep. It was great that I finally had awaken from the...
Maybe can update tonight.
I will be very nice here, the nicest I've been about critiquing. 1. No plot. 2. Bad spelling and grammar. 3. Ever heard of spellcheck? 4....
Brilliant.
I haven't forgotten this. Just too busy to update for while. However my partner can update in her POV until I can and I will give that amount of...
Have to join, love the show... Name: Wes Age: 18 Gender: Male Looks: [img] I just took that so it's realistic! Lol Weapons: Small revolver...
I'm working on it. Probably tomorrow. It's my birthday today.
Bump.
That. Was. BRILLIANT.
For sure. Give as many details as possible, imagine what you are writing, and write the details of what you see. Add depth to your character so...
It's my co-author's turn. :)
I was in still in the diner. I was in there so long it began to be nightfall. I quickly stepped off the stool and straightened my suit and tie,...
I will update tonight for sure! I have some friends I'm going out with tonight but I'll update when I'm back.
Seriously? My story is not a roleplay thread.
My wonderful co author's turn.
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