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There's still some good writers left. Like, 1-2. Lol
Let's face it, FF is basically going back to the first days of PIMD. We have to go through the whole high school cliche revolution again.
"Tell me Chris," I said walking with him through the mall, "who do you work for?" "I work for the government." He said putting his M16 on his...
I stared into her eyes for second, and looked over her. Her expression told me she had an attraction to me, but her body language told me she was...
Well, I wasn't aware my stories were bad.
This is highly predictable. No offense or anything.
I will update this right away! I've had about a billion things to do! But I will update soon because of my break.
Okay, I need to put some input. You still don't have any correct punctuation. Some of your words are spelled wrong. You are saying you haven't...
Just the content is unnecessary. Just stop the story. These people already want you out.
No. Just...no.
First of all... This plot is inappropriate and terrible. Secondly, your grammatical skills are that of a first grader. Thirdly, the lack of any...
You friend zoned the guy once. No offense here, but if you did it once, do you think that you won't do it again as soon as you date him? I mean...
Without being high? Everything God creates isn't a mistake? Yet he supposedly created marijuana??? Sorry, had to pick at that. But I like this.
I like this. Better than the romance crap.
Couldn't there just be a regular detective roleplay? O.o
A story should NEVER be written in roleplay form. EVER.
Updating soon.
Does anybody want me to continue?
Bump
It's her turn. Lol