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Well I've been with mine since November of last year.
Thanks! Update probably tomorrow but since it's Easter, I'm going to church and spending the day with my family so maybe there might be an update!...
Brennan(PoV) ----------- Karina. Karina.Karina. What a cutie. All I could see is her staring at me. "Hey Brennan. Sorry for staring at you." She...
Karina -------- Oh hey look.It's Brennan again! Well he is my locker neighbor I see him everyday duh. I feel embarrassed to I guess I should talk...
I Love TheOneYouWantToBe. He's so sweet and kind. He talks to me every chance he gets. He even tried when he went on a trip to Rome. He's so...
Thanks Royale. And "he" is Brennan I said his name in the story.
(Brennan's PoV) I Walk to my locker at school and open it up. What a mess! I have to clean up more often. I better get going or I'll be late to...
So I took a lot of tips from writers here on Fan Fiction and I created another story. I hope it seems realistic because that what I'm trying to...
I just lay down on my bed, play Pimd, and Watch YouTube videos. I repeat that pretty much everyday.
Bump! It's great!!
That's cool! Lol but don't steal my story!
Chapter 4 Brennan caught me and protected me as everyone raced to get in. They practically fought to get in. Brennan closes the door after...
Nice it's good. Make sure to capitalize letters when they have to be capitalized . Just reread your updates before posting. But everything else...
Chapter 3 I run outside and see Brennan standing there beside his car. Wow was all I could think. He had a Mercedes Benz. I just stared at it....
I like it . I look forward to the next update.
Though*
It's a made up story thought everything is fake.
Don't worry. I'm not upset . Thanks for the tips although this is just a made up story I could use tips along the way and help on updating chapters.
Chapter 2 I loved his voice. It was deep,nice and loving. He was wearing a white v-neck and black jeans. I put away the pocket knife in my...
It's ok Mary everyone has their own likes and dislikes.