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This is a simulating read, the background story of Eve and Lilith was interesting. Hopefully you can continue because this is a good read!
Ah~ Cin-Chan is back with another lightening story. Yay~!
Amazingly detailed! Though there were just a few grammatical errors. The blood and movement was written great!
... I'm here Shazza. Great bloody oath job. This will be a fun challenge, competitive sides come out as they say~
Oh, this is defiantly intriguing, a different type of murder story. Hopefully, by the end it won't go all sappy but so far it's wonderfully...
This is a great piece, the length showed off great progress for the start! The whole thing has got me hooked, I need more! ?
Man this has reached an exciting point, all the personalities are wonderful by the way. The distribution of description is still at a good...
It was very enjoyable to read with the beautiful description. As the plot still shows it's mysteries with not being revealed yet.❄ The only...
Hey! Long time no update, now since Cin needs time to re-write her update I thought I would give her some inspiration by posting mine. Gomen! It's...
I'm here after the awaiting, thank you for your patience. Man this story and genre is really new to me, also all these new people I haven't meet....
There is already a sequel titled Amended~
❄ Hope of the update! ❄
Sorry about the wait~ Surely I'll have an update by the end of this week!?
Wonderful Brooke, your short but sweet updates always leave a Charlie in the Chocolate Factory feel. ? Can't believe it is soon coming to an end~
Ah fantastic work!? The characters, going back and forth with flashbacks. Who wouldn't go for a wonderful coffee though? Strange girl.
Hey that's your opinion~
See, no need to worry! Human emotion is the purest form. Writing gives a great surface to be able to express~
Cin! This is an enjoyment to read, like a rock'n fairy tale remix. Toy maker~
Haha ? Sorry for my weird updating patterns. I try for once a week but... You see how that doesn't work. Also about the long paragraphs, gomen~
Episode 13: ~Pãšt, pręśęñt, fęår~ The wind blew sharply against the brushes of tree trunks. Howling alone in the breeze, the lone of wolves...