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Alrighty then
Thanks for the helpful criticism! I'll make sure to follow the strict rules
Hi guys I'm a little new at this criticism is good please help me along the road! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The first day if school....
(Still able to join?)
Cam:-sits alone-
( how bout TMDC tell the princable that they wanna throw a dance)
Cam:-starts going to post office-
Cam:-sighs-
Cam:-waits in front if school-
Cam:-runs into homeroom-
Cam:-runs to school-
(Ate we suppose to say wat the letter says?)
Cam:-puts note in- (are we suppose to say the note?)
Cam:- finds TMDC's mailbox-
Cam:-starts a fire above my finger-
Cam:-goes to post office-
Cam:-sits alone in corner-
Cam:-sits in cafeteria-
Cam:-sits in corner looking at my flame that dances over my fingertip-
Bc some jock tripped me-