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This is so not a fan fiction commenting thread haha Its pretty entertaining though lol.
Chapter 10: So Close... The first few weeks of school went by in a breeze. Aly hadn't been challenged with any majorly hard school work, she was...
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Lol don't you hate it when people don't like critique that fight was so funng
Lol its going too slow sorry if its boring at the moment... Trying to get motivated but I'm busy packing and stuff
Soooo... You are calling me a "hater" because I'm trying to help you write a story and give you good critique? I meant no harm I was just...
Try not to use texting/slang in your writing... Maybe that will help. Like instead of "y" spell it out:Why, r=are, frienz=friends, cuz=because.
Chapter 3: New Life Declan glanced over to Damon. His mind raced a million miles per hour. Were Damon and Alexandra really their parents? He...
Can't we all just not try to get the last word and just shut up? You all know I love you all, but come on lol let's get back on topic and not...
Chapter 2: Bright Light Declan moaned as light filled his eyes. Whatever room he was in, it was the brightest thing he had ever seen in his life....
Well, keep writing you are obviously great at it. Keep writing like this and I'll be your best fan fiction fan haha.
Wow... Just wow I honestly am really drawn into this. Please write more. This sounds like it could be potentially an amazing story
Yea I went through a tough time... Still am, but I'm back here
Soph Im back!!! Aghhh!!!
Haha I'm just trying to calm everyone Breathe in, breathe out... Deep breath... Exhale. Goooooood now hold hands and sing "Why can't we be...
The greatest writers have recieved the best and worst criticism you can imagine. Authors like Dan Brown, James Patterson, J.K Rowling some of the...
Alright guys and girls, lay off the OP. She was just stating her opinion and giving her critique on Fan Fiction writers. You people don't need to...