Separate names with a comma.
I would cut down on the ellipses. Personally, I think they ruin the mood and make the story a little tedious if you use too many. Proofreading...
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Huh. I wonder where I know you from. Beta wars?
Fear-My-Hammer-I-Am-Thor Despite his name being long to type, he's an awesome pup. He's really fun to talk to. And he's a little obsessed with...