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I like it...great descriptive factors, as well as the errors Fallen pointed out >_< but it's a great start
Sorry it took a while I've been busy all week.. ---- "Carla Felicity or should I say Kimi Ojunga," The man muttered underneath his breath the...
I'll update on, Mondays, Wednesdays, and Sundays when I can
Introducing one of my favorite characters...~>Excited<~ ----- "Bigger than I expected! Much, much bigger!" A horrible villain like voice boomed...
I'm glad I could gain your interest..?I'll be updating tomorrow if possible
Thanks...that 'hmm' is intimidating?
Hi FF... so I'm writing again! And I hope you like this story. ---- Secret Society of W.S.P. (Weird, Special, People!) Man, it was...
if I hadn't been lurking in ff I would not have seen this update, I'd try letting readers know you updated, or else this might be on the second...
Great story, attention grabbing, and very well done minus a few errors. I'd love to read more. Name: Kin Age: 16 History: She was targeted a...
Hmm let's see.. Thank you for the helpful comments on Mists story, since I'm kinda helping him I'm posting the next part. Just to give him an idea...
It has potential
Page 5?.....(bump) unless nobody would like the update
For us otaku's and manga super fans...you don't know how happy we are *superpsyched*
I also wanted to say since you're coming back it's technically not quitting, you ARE still here with us just think of it as a mini-vacation....
.......................................my names not on there...............*instant depression*......... I like how you're handling things thou,...
Bump
Ki: Oy ve...-uses her lightning, the abilities of her character-
(Mm, not too late...so jealous of Ark and Luke -.-' in the same realm) Ki: Boring, this is the Rockstar stage right...hmm
Ok o.o....setting System: You've just been transported into your game realm...good luck.
creepy, and well we can start now if you're ready