Separate names with a comma.
They're real people, but the events are a made up in our little fantasy land.
Jeez. This character is annoying and whiny.
There's also another asshole somewhere who still reads this. We have two faithful viewers who are here because they're in this. And Angel person,...
...that seems a bit...fast...eh? Like, if she was in a relationship for awhile you'd think he'd be a jerk after the honeymoon phase wore off. A...
Nooooooo don't bump our story damnit >:| that's only what desperate people do.
Ninja
That last chunk, which is a piece of Emmett's POV, I know, weird, is completely and totally irrelevant, but I wrote it anyways because IT WAS TWO...
It's a fight or flight reaction. I'd hide. All y'all (most of y'all) would go on crazy-ass killing sprees or steal shit, which should probably...
._. I blame him, because HE CAN WRITE TOO. *Shanks with rubber knife*
Yes.
Good gracious. I can't even...I can't even read it. Please, for the love of all things good, use commas. And use periods, but remember, the space...
Heh. Main character death. Loves it ;D. The only thing, could've used a tiny bit more buildup for the death.
Fuckin douche ,_,
Um... Does anyone else get a Twilightly feel from this? Also, I'm quite confused. This seems to have moved rather quickly. He proposed marriage?...
*Emmett pointed Fuck. Roy. What in Sam Hell did you write at the bottom?
Re: Green I'm not sure what it is I think, but I do know that I like him. I like him a lot. But for some reason, he's Cajun in my brain. I don't...
Don't be one of those lameos who bump their own story Roy. Stahp.
Re: Green Oh wow. This is continually interesting :3. I just adore the description in this.
Re: Green Boy am I glad I clicked on this. This is wondrously well written, and it's already gotten my attention. I'd love it if you would...
It means we're using google docs. Christ Roy, put it in layman's terms.