Separate names with a comma.
And that's okay, nobody tries to copy and actually you're a very good writer, if you just keep writing and work on it you could be great
Exactly! And that's fine it's your story It's just you said criticism is welcome so I just wanted to give some helpful stuff ? But it is a great...
But like I said it's a great story keep it up
Actually, in books they do that... Every time a person speaks they start a new line, they might not have the spaces but they most definitely start...
Okay so this story is great, but just try to space it out a little, the huge paragraphs are harder to read, when someone else starts to talk you...
️️WARNING️️ ‼️This Submission May Not Be Suitable For All Ages.?‼️ July 17th "Macie, Macie wake up." I was being shaken awake and slowly...
[color=red] Just learned how to do this Lawls [/red]
I'll update today
Bump. There you go Sampson. ? Lazy A-- ?
So guys, if you want to see anything more just let me know! If there's any tips you have just tell me I'd love to have your input
July 5th I woke up to a beautiful day, with puddles cuddling into my side and the bird chirping, and I was incredibly happy. I went downstairs...
It's a good story don't get me wrong, it's just very very difficult to read/understand
Okay so I'm going to give you some tips... 1. Work on your punctuation there's no spaces in-between your words and your "? . , !" 2. When...
Now that's just rude ️
July 4th Drew and I had gone to the beach on the Fourth of July, we were there all day just enjoying the day. And then he decided to kiss me....
(Sorry it accidentally posted I meant to add on more) After we had eaten we went over to the living room and watched TV for awhile. "Macie?"...
July 4th I had woken up to find Drew next to me in bed naked and started shaking him awake. "Drew, Drew wake up" I was almost screaming in his...
Oh my lord guys I'm so sorry! I've had exams all this week and been so busy but now it's SUMMER and I'll be able to update MUCH more often!...
Bump
Glad you guys like the story ️ Will be updating this weekend