Separate names with a comma.
Sorry but I just feel that you take writing on here just a little bit too serious... No need to be offended!
SOOOO MUCH WRITING! Sorry but this isn't school, people are allowed to put a freaking capital letter in the middle of their sentences... Why?...
Izzy: -takes of shirt and jumps into the river wearing my bikini-
Izzy: -practices target practice then heads back to the river-
Izzy: -smiles at solin as I walk by and head to target practice-
Izzy: sorry I better get to training -puts a shirt on over my bikini and walks to training base-
Izzy: -gets on my motor bike and starts looking for him-
Longer and more story line but well done!
Izzy: -texts back- ~I don't know you but I'll do everything to save you...~
Izzy: -swims to bank and dries off the sits on a rock-
Izzy: -reads text and dials 999- Me: hello? Operator: 999 how can we help you? Me: someone has been kidnapped... Operator: in this area? Me: yes...
Izzy: -sees a text on someones phone so I text back as the phone was just on the seat- ~hello?~
Izzy: -opens my eyes under water and sees chris so I wave and swim over-
Izzy: -stares and blushes then looks away and dives below the water then I throw away my top and shorts revealing my bikini-
Izzy: -finds my locker and sits outside reading a book-
Where Is it?
Izzy: -runs down to the lake and jumps in with all my clothes on-
Izzy: fancy a swim in the lake? -smiles-
Izzy: oh hi chris... Thankyou for helping me -smiles-
Izzy: -smiles at him- thanks um... I'm izzy