Separate names with a comma.
. . Eh, it's a decent start however there are some things you can do to improve... . . •Put punctuation in speech. For example:...
. . Out of curiosity, I have a mini questionnaire for you guys. I want to work on a new short story, but the idea for it varies. ....
. . Heh, gramma. ;3 Grammar? xP Anyway, I'm working on a story pretty much right now and I was wondering how far through a story had to...
. :o The above statement would be true sort off if you guys role played in paragraphs. Not to be offensive as this is sometimes a good...
. Hm... I like this. It has an interesting start, and makes me want to know more. I feel like the story has good potential, but there are a few...
I'll probably be updating this on Wattpad from now on. :3
Esme: *Listens.*
Read this earlier... Love it!
Bump!
Esme: *Orders a drink for her and Celia, trying to avoid the bartenders gaze so he wouldn't recognise her.*
Esme: *Smiles and Celia and mutters.* Thanks~
Sprite: Hell yeah! *Starts walking.*
^-^
Esme: Sorta. *Nods.*
Sprite: You should~
Esme: *Sighs a little in relief.* And what might that be?
Esme: This isn't a proper task. This is me just testing how good you are before considering properly hiring you. *Lies.* Don't believe me, go on....
Esme: *Smirks a little, attempting to act confident.* The Queen hired you? Silly boy. For someone who knows all, you don't know that the Queen...
Esme: Well then, what do you want?
*A not I.