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I miss the old times ASDFGHJKL. When good stories were all you see. When everyone was active. When real honest critique was given. When stories...
so good jihiiii<3 as usual. Bump! This is like a sorta choose your own adventure kinda thing. c;
Use punctuation. Description. When Using dialogues, use quotation marks. Try putting it in paragraph form. And don't hate on Adam. He was being...
AHHH. I found iittt! (": this was the amazing PiMD days<3 I'll update this someday. Check out my other story, Gone with the Wind. Just started it....
Jihiiiii. YOU NEED TO UPDATE<333333333 (:
Mikala: lol yeah I totally remember you. Flubber: SNAPNO. In my defense I was pret-ty sleepy. I thought you didn't leave. AHH. sorryyy. You take...
This is really good! Bump!
this is really good! One of the better stories here. Bump! Critique is to give more description, but I like the words you use.
Gone with the Wind ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I walked past the traffic lights; busy streets and busy nights. Everyone was paying no attention to...
omg. KIRAAAAAA<33 And yes, me too. -.-
Tash: I totally understand what you mean. If they want roleplays, it'll be better if they limit themselves to a few.
Eli: yeah me too. My finals are coming up and it's hell week. I miss you loads. Sure, I'll update you. Chloe: lurking is what I'm probably...
PIE ASDFGHJKL YOU'RE STILL HERE! Accidentally: You're welcome (: Red: first, thank you. that means alot. Second, I agree that everyone has...
Hey Rhy!
Darkai: who are you? Adam: your stories are really good! Seriously. AccidentallyMe: I haven't seen your story lol I'll check it out. I think...
woah.
Don't forget that one mean girl who also wants the guy.
Roze: AHHHHHHH<33 You're hereeeeeeee! Tarru: ikr. Haha. I don't really RP. Qin: lurking is a good hobby. Tash: I know. No offense to the...
I remember you too! (and yeah, there are a few pretty good ones. But alot of what people are making nowadays aren't...that...good. Lol.)
I miss iCarly already. And Drake and Josh was my life. Suite Life of Zack and Cody And all those shows that made my childhood amazing.