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(Sorry. Sprite not Jess.)
Jess: *A confused expression appears on her face.* Huh?
Sprite: Find what..? *Looks at Luna, plugging one headphone in.* Jess: *Fiddles with her bear charm out of habit.*
Lime
Jess: *Watching, feeling a little nervous. Stares at the birds.* Sprite: Awesome! There was no killer mayo, too! *Nods.*
Jess: *Attempts to change Erics emotion to calm, staying hidden by a broad bush. Smirks at what Apollo said.* Sprite: *Drinks her coffee quickly...
Sprite: Whatever, let's just grab some food. *Yawns and slowly looks around.* Reveal yourself bacon. *Gets a magnifying glass out of my pocket.*
Sprite: Geez, thanks for telling me. *Glares at Garret.*
Sprite: Liiies, and I will if I have to walk any further. D:< Are we there yet? *Grins, saying the annoying phrase.*
I'm writing this update whilst on a plane so if it's complete shit it's because I'm flying and I hate flying (and my ear wrecks, and my head...
Jess: *Walks out of her house, making plans in her head.*
Diamond. :D Omg I used to write Pokemon stories. xD They were just for messing about though. You defo need to write this soooon or feel the wrath...
What do you mean by race? :3
This is really good. Update soon.
Sprite: *Sleeping.* Jess: *Making plans and scribbling ideas on paper.*
(Blah, I missed a lot~ )
Mirror.
Sprite: Okay.. We don't have to get up early though, right? *Looks slightly alarmed, being far from a morning person. :3*
Sprite: Eh, okay. *Yawns.* Night then boss. Hahaha boss doss loss shoss- Okay, I'll shut up. 'Night~ *Laighs a little then stretches.*
Sprite: Dude! *Mock glares at him then laughs.* What do we do now?