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Very nice. More please.
During the last shift I'm up and keeping watch as a group of enemy soldiers start coming in to view. I see that the sniper from my platoon had put...
How the hell did he get in.
Fox looks at me and laughs. "You mean me don't you Lt?" I laugh "yes I do. If we survive this I'm asking you on a date." Fox smiles "Ok. Well...
More more. Update now. Please.
Ok. I'll update in 2 in a half
I look around and nod. " OK everyone here is what we are gonna do. Me and Fox will fortify the south wall, Nicks and Ceña the north, and Kinzie...
Good update. There's no creepy Connor.
Pvt. Nicks looks at me and starts to frown. Sgt Ceña looks and asks "Nicks how old are you even?" Nicks looks and says "18 sir. I just joined...
Holy crap. Connor better go to jail. And stay at the school. I'm in love with this story. Its amazing. Update
More add more I'm on the edge of my seat.
Oh nice. I will say Kelsey is my fav character. More add more soon.
(I know I said I'd update in the morning but I can't sleep so I'll do a quick update) I look at Renegade "tell them to come here." Renegade...
Yay. More.
I look at Renegade "that leaves 3 wound what about them." "They can fight. All they have is some bumps and bruises from the explosions." "Ok...
I walk over to Kinzie and say "We won't let Earl's death be in vain. We will survive this battle for as along as we can. I promise." Kinzie...
Ok. Cool.
I did its good.
Good so far. Add more.
Has the story gotten better. I'll update later tonight.