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*doctor comes out* Doctor: I have something for you, she said it was important you have it. *hands them a note saying: see it brought you two...
Ren: *tear falls* where ... where am I ... Rose! Rose where are you!?
*smiles* Ren: I ... don't loose.. for nothing ...
Ren: Blake... step .. trap... I moved.. him *eyes close*
*eyes stare blankly at the sky, slowly closing*
Ren: ... where .. where are we ..
*pulls out my dagger from my boot and holds it in front of me ready* Ren: why can't I .. I can't .. why's everything silent.. *looks at roses...
*looks at Ben petrified and tries to quickly stand, but falls against the wall*
Ren: *really dizzy* I .. I .. *looks around dazed* who's there?
Ren: Ro.. se? *sees the blood and passes out*
*stands behind the building holding onto my ankles tightly,* Ren: shit! *ankle was caught in an animal trap and is now bleeding with 6 deep...
*walks into the rain and off behind a building, almost like if I was hypnotised* Ren: thanks..
Ren: *looks at Ben and Rose together and grins slyly* hold this for me a sec will ya Ben? *passes the umbrella over
Ren: *smiles at Rose* Your welcome.
(wow Luce sounds like ren slightly.. cool ^^)
Ren: that's a lil harsh? *covers Ben with the umbrella* Oh look it's Rose! Hey Rose get over here you'll get soaked!
( take care!)
*looks at Ben* Ren: you know it's gunna rain soon... you might want to keep and eye on him.. *puts up a black umbrella and after a few minutes...
*shakes my head laughing* Ren: bye to you too ( take care Josh!)
Ren: *looks at Blake and smiles* really?