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"And I'm not young" she glares
"I trust Sumi... She's my sister and my only friend" Rayne shrugs
Rayne rolled her eyes,"Sumi makes me wear dresses"
Rayne looks at him,"good point" she looks back down at her dress
Rayne rolls her eyes," oh yes ya know bleeding is regular for me" she stares at the blood.
Rayne stands slowly red streaking across her dress,"f*ck"
(Hahhahahahah XD)
Rayne glares at the ground,"ow"
(I guess XD )
(Something is 'sticking her' XD LMAO)
Rayne sits up,"stupid carpet" Rayne blows the hair out of her eyes
Rayne trips over a carpet,"agh"
(Adult stuff XD)
Sumi lays on her bed crying in pain
Rayne walks around,"what should I do?"
Rayne takes Sumi up to her room and walks into a room that she's never seen before
Rayne helps Sumi up,"come on" Andrew walks up to Sumi's room
Sumi tries to stand but gasps at how much her ribs hurt Andrew got up and left Sumi and Rayne there
(*one)
Sumi sighs looking at the ring Rayne thinks to her self,"how could she" Andrew smiles,lone big happy family"