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Ok, hey guys. Well I was stumbling around on this and saw something that was poetry. And I liked the idea alot. So I made this thread for people...
Claire I stared at his face, feeling so much happiness in me. I would finally get to swim. To stretch out my fin and feel like me,feel...
If anyone else is there and would like to give me constructive criticism, I would love that. I'm always looking to improve my story! Thanks a...
I know,I'm sorry guys. Grammar is my worst subject. Thank you so much for the constructive critiscm though!!
Haha good guess, but not correct
Claire I lifted my head up as I stared around me. I was in a small room. It was white and clear. I walked around my feet making a sloshing...
That's what I thought oh what's has the cruel world come to! Next your gonna tell me keeping up with the kardashians isnt staged and the toys...
Bump
Bump!
Claire I still felt the sting in my cheek as I ran away. My bright orange toms comforting my feet. A contradiction to the bright green grass. I...
Bumpier bump bump
Ill explain in the next update.
Cherry, she stopped half way thru member?
Grant I walked around campus angrily. Where was she? I looked in the upstairs grade, she was always with that loser. Not there I went one...
Bump!!
Claire It had already been a week of school. I figured my and Carter would be better acquainted. Eeer,wrong soo wrong. Carter was so off and...
I'll have an update by the end of tonight
I really do like all your criticism, it's helps make the story better.
Thank you all- espicially Happiness sadness I love criticism as long it's not attacking me.
Is anyone even here? Or care