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I wince and bite my lip to keep from screaming in pain. (geez I made raven a bit dramatic )
(lmao it's wrong for an angle? So geometry can't be evil? )
I clutch at my side, and tenderly lift up my shirt. There's a deep cut from the beast's claws. My eyes widen at the blood and I black out. (So...
"I got kicked out of heaven b-because I got revenge. Some stupid drunk driver hit my sister, and put her in a coma. When I died, I made him crash...
(maybe somebody should be like "raven, what're you talking about?!"? )
(Raven tis about to explain her backstory) "All that blood… all those people!" I gasp, tears streaming down my face. "I-I never meant for it to...
"D-do I look fine?!" I whimper, paling at the sight of my blood. "I never wanted to see blood again…" I croak.
"Hey! Can you two quit sucking face and help me!" I shout, flying into a panicked rage.
dramatic backstory)
"Guys? I need help!" I say clearer now, freaking out. I wasn't a fan of blood, ever since the day of the accident. (gasp! Raven has a
I raised my arm to playfully hit Chris on the shoulder, but a searing pain stops me. I look down and remember the giant gash. It was still...
(Raven. I thought you remembered?! )
"smooth." I whisper to Chris, nudging him in the side. I snicker.
"If you're worried about your boobs… erm, they're, um, fine I guess?" () I stuttered, trying to figure out what to say. ()
"What?!" I ask.
"We ALL wanted to say something." I snicker.
(Derp. )
(by now I think sal has been kidnapped )
(pfft, he's little if he's checking someone out )
(pervy little boy ) With a sigh, I slump to the ground and black out, extremely drained of energy.