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I sigh a little because Deven truly couldn't be with me forever unless he died. I suddenly squeeze Deven in a hug.
(so sex would be great if she died of passion? somebody's strange and mordici chris actually didn't like doing it because he's a demon. )
(no matter what species you are sex is supposed to be awesome. )
Your story tis not lousy
(hey! Appreciate the "something that rhymes with sex" with Kam! )
(agreed sal ) I sit up, looking at Deven. "Really?"
"So… what did you wish for?"
(it's okay sal, I didn't do anything )
"Make a wish." I say, smiling at a shooting star flashing across the horizon.
(oh god it might get too awkward before 3rd base. TIMESKIPS PLEASE!? )
(I'd rather not be "banged" ) "I do too." I say, looking right at him. "I actually don't think I've liked someone as much as you."
"Anything..." I say, smiling.
(geez everyone's about to get laid except for me . But I take things slow, unlike YOU GUYS. )
(Then get to it! ) "Yes?" I answer, looking up at him.
(3rd base is pretty much making out, horizontal position, in, or out of your underwear. glad I could help in making things awkward )
I break away from Deven and smile, turning to lie on my back. It was already nighttime, and I looked at the stars.
(sigh... oh young one. So much to learn! )
(third base )
() (methinks deven is obsessed with ravens hair )
(umm, timeskip? Now? Or just do whatever floats your boat. )