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Aff, i didn't mean to write "glow", i meant "flow"! Sorry!
Well if you're not aiming for world-renowned poetry, it's not that bad, just need to fix up the rythum and glow of the whole thing. Also, the four...
OMG! I've read all updates and comments (ok, MOST comments) since the first part and I NEED MOAR!!! So therefore: BUMPITYBUMPITYBUMPITY...